The Shrine

Well I am trying again to do that story. Some new characters, new format, and I actually have a staff to help me and keep me from being overwhelmed. If anyone is willing to take a look and give me some constructive critique, please go to www.rustyharddrive.com

Well its been 3 weeks sience I relaunched the comic and I am looking for whatever feedback I can get. Please let me know what you think, and give me any critizism you feel necessary. However I do ask that you be constructive about said critizism. I appreciate the time it will take everyone to read the comics that have been done so far, and a thanks in advance for any comments you make.

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Damnit he told me that was working now. My friend who runs the site had to reformat today and things broke. I'll get it taken care of first thing in the morning. Sorry

OK sorry about that, it looks like everything is working now.

One suggestion, Mac: the text takes up a very large area of the frame. It's tough to actually tell what's in the frame other than the text since it's so big. Everything else is squished together.

Other than that, I like the idea. Gotta read some more

Well its a dillema I am having. If I make the text too small, its hard to read, if I make it too big it takes up too much space. I am kinda at a loss for what to do with it.

Well its a dillema I am having. If I make the text too small, its hard to read, if I make it too big it takes up too much space. I am kinda at a loss for what to do with it.

With less characters, maybe you would write less text. What were you trying to do, make every one of your RL friends happy that they are in the thing?

No, the idea is that after this first world we are gonna be split up into 4 teams, one that is tech support, and then 3 travel teams. Once that happens it probally wont be as bad.