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Request for feedback on a hip-hop song I produced!
- Your favorite band sucks, and you have terrible taste in movies.
The guy who does most of the talking (sounds like Snoop) has a good flow.
I'm not too big on the other guy and there's distortion in some of the shit he says and the noises he makes like he's got the mic too close to his mouth or he's spitting on it.
The saxaphone needs to either be softer and more frequent, or not there at all. It came out of nowhere the first time and was startling, not to mention in the middle of a verse.
Lyrics, from the intro were typical ("hatin on", "keep it real", "playboy", "gangsta"), but get better as the uh... Snoop-sounding guy starts.
So not bad but the guy who does the background kind of bites.
I don't listen to a lot of hip hop.
I'm not too big on the other guy and there's distortion in some of the shit he says and the noises he makes like he's got the mic too close to his mouth or he's spitting on it.
The saxaphone needs to either be softer and more frequent, or not there at all. It came out of nowhere the first time and was startling, not to mention in the middle of a verse.
Lyrics, from the intro were typical ("hatin on", "keep it real", "playboy", "gangsta"), but get better as the uh... Snoop-sounding guy starts.
So not bad but the guy who does the background kind of bites.
I don't listen to a lot of hip hop.
